Every novel can’t be a winner. Lloyd Royce’s H Is for Hell, which came in 1963 from Intimate Editions, has a nice cover painted by Chet Collom, but it’s a really bad book. It’s half-baked, dreary, and infantile. The story deals with the line of succession in a large business called Ace Sales, how the dying patriarch’s alcoholic son and drug addict daughter are passed over in favor of his nymphomaniac niece, and what happens when the mafia tries to take over and the company’s product manager Mike Lawe steps in to play hero. That may sound interesting, but the book is a front and rear cover folded around a gaping void where writing skill should be. Royce uses the word “withdrawl” not once, but three times. Three. And it got past his editors too. We’re not perfect. We make occasional mistakes or typos here, but we write thousands of words a week, and with no editors at all. Inexcusable stuff from Royce.
